Introduction: I changed my introduction by adding to the information I had already included in the introduction. I elaborated on the thoughts of Nair and Nair and James Gee and briefly tied those ideas back to my own. I attempted to make my thesis more clear and my claim more concise.
Evidence and Explanations: I added more evidence and quotes than I had originally in my first draft. I added more in the areas regarding my claims for the building tasks of practices and politics. I added more evidence to strengthen my claims for these building tasks.
Reorganization: I didn’t do much reorganization between my first and second draft but I did add a few paragraphs in different spots.
New Paragraphs: I added new paragraphs to my paper pertaining to politics as a building tasks and practices.
